User blog comment:VideoVixen123/Holiday Drama/@comment-4915867-20121125151607

oh look, this is the appearance of nia the grammar Nazi. this is never good. she only appears a few times a year. PREPARE YOUR WAR ATTIRE.

Sorry, hon. I'm trying to give your fanfic a chance, it's just that the spacing bothers me as heck and I really can't get through. Please put a space behind punctuation marks (I get iffy about that), and since multiple enters/returns (depending on your device) don't work while you are using "tabber", I suggest using the or because that creates line breaks.

I'm sure you have a really nice fanfic going, it is just hard to read with some spacing issues. well I can't get through it I don't understand one word enjoy.